7,475 / 50,000

by jake on November 4, 2010

Okay, today’s output was a little lame. I was stepping out of the outline for what amounted to freestyle writing, of which most of it is likely nonsensical, and was becoming a little disturbing toward the end. Less of a writing bubble than yesterday, and I am looking forward to returning to that part of the story. This part I stepped into today is definitely the weak link, but it’s also the part that addresses the central part of the story most directly. Maybe that’s the problem. When in doubt, obfuscate!*

*not good writing advice

Random sentences:

The text scrolled along.

It was a continual battle against the wedge.

What a terrifying moment that would be, due to its possibility despite being entirely unreasonable.

But there was something about the increasing presence of everything ageless in his life that unnerved him deeply.

The social revolution had a status update.

(oy.)

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